[Haruhi/TVtropes] Kyon: Big Damn Hero

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Brian

May 30, 2010, 05:45:21 AM Last Edit: September 08, 2011, 12:30:28 PM by Brian
I'm writing a story that crosses the world of Suzumiya Haruhi with the world of TVtropes.

Yeah, I know....  Long story.  Anyway, I'm 14 chapters in.  If you're familiar with the novels ... enjoy!  Otherwise ... enjoy anyway!

I appreciate feedback, buuut....  I don't think that this forum has as many Haruhi fans, so I'm just going to post updates instead of chapters in the fiction forum.

I think that covers it.

http://pishoque.net/brian/fanfic/kbdh/index.htm
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Dracos

#1
May 31, 2010, 02:29:34 PM
You're crazy.  Absolutely insane.
Well, Goodbye.

Brian

#2
May 31, 2010, 10:28:30 PM
Why, thank you, Dracly one. :D
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Brian

#3
June 02, 2010, 08:23:38 PM
An additional chapter (15) has been posting, bringing us to the long-awaited Fanservice Arc.  Higurashi crossover ahoy!
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Brian

#4
June 07, 2010, 07:53:56 PM
The Fanservice Arc continues.  Chapter 16 is up.  Higurashi crossover plus next-gen cast, full steam ahead!
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Brian

#5
June 11, 2010, 08:15:16 PM
Moar Fanservice Arc.  Chapter 17 up.  Contains significantly more than your recommended dosage of bathing scenes.
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Brian

#6
June 14, 2010, 11:46:05 PM
And the Fanservice Arc concludes, leaving Hinamizawa behind.
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Edward

#7
June 22, 2010, 02:23:57 AM Last Edit: June 22, 2010, 02:57:34 AM by Edward
Interesting.

Chapter 10 -  "On the north end of Honshu, not too far from the Tsugaru straight."

Should be "Tsugaru _strait_"

Chapter 11 - "Mt trial is to learn to take responsibility, not avoid it.  So!  Tell me everything."

Should be "_My_ trial..."
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Edward

#8
June 22, 2010, 10:12:33 AM
Chapter 12 - "If you had either, I would demand them instantly," the president snapped.  "No go; my patience wears thin."

Should be "_Now_ go...."
If you see Vampire Hikaru Shidou, it is Fox.  No one else does that.  You need no other evidence." - Dracos

"Huh? Which rant?" - Gary

"Do not taunt Happy Fun Servitor of the Outer Gods with your ineffective Thompson Submachine Gun." - grimjack

Brian

#9
June 22, 2010, 04:44:55 PM
Chapter 19 is now up.

Quote from: Edward on June 22, 2010, 10:12:33 AMChapter 10 -
Chapter 11 -
Chapter 12 -
Waha~!  Corrections~!  Excellent. :3  Thank you very much for catching those, Mr. Simons!
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Edward

#10
June 22, 2010, 09:32:28 PM
  "Kyon-nii-sama," Matsuri said, insistently, "you use your powers for good, right?"

"Nope," his sister told her, smirking.  "He uses his powers for awesome! 


Bwahahahaha!
If you see Vampire Hikaru Shidou, it is Fox.  No one else does that.  You need no other evidence." - Dracos

"Huh? Which rant?" - Gary

"Do not taunt Happy Fun Servitor of the Outer Gods with your ineffective Thompson Submachine Gun." - grimjack

Edward

#11
June 23, 2010, 09:45:04 AM
Chapter 18 "Grumbling about the probability of getting his nice borrowed suit dirty, Kyon managed to break into a full at the same time as Haruhi, streaking around the far side of the house. "

Should be - "Grumbling about the probability of getting his nice borrowed suit dirty, Kyon managed to break into a full _run_ at the same time as Haruhi, streaking around the far side of the house. "
If you see Vampire Hikaru Shidou, it is Fox.  No one else does that.  You need no other evidence." - Dracos

"Huh? Which rant?" - Gary

"Do not taunt Happy Fun Servitor of the Outer Gods with your ineffective Thompson Submachine Gun." - grimjack

Brian

#12
June 24, 2010, 10:33:09 PM
Oops, another fine catch.  Thanks, as always, Mr. Simons. :3
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Brian

#13
June 25, 2010, 07:17:04 AM
Chapter 20 is now up.  As per the author's notes, internet access may be sporadic in the future. o_o
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Edward

#14
June 26, 2010, 02:30:22 AM
Well, here's hoping things aren't too sporadic. Nice to see the plot developing and characters growing, which is typical for you, but not what you'd expect from something based on TV Tropes. I especially like how timid-Mikuru is starting to grow into the cooler future version.

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Ukyou: With all her training in cooking, I recommend Mikuru learn food-based martial arts
Miruku: I don't think my universe works that way.
If you see Vampire Hikaru Shidou, it is Fox.  No one else does that.  You need no other evidence." - Dracos

"Huh? Which rant?" - Gary

"Do not taunt Happy Fun Servitor of the Outer Gods with your ineffective Thompson Submachine Gun." - grimjack
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